Brotherhood (new FMA drawing)

After this intense period of drawing request, I thought it would be kewl to have a day of break. So I made this:

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Inked version (Im gonna make the lines clean and rectify some small details like that later.)

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I hate my scanner so much!!!! D< But I wanna ink this drawing so I want it to have no little problems (my specialty) before I ink it.
So CnC, comment, ...

*I'll add the details (in the eyes and stuff) later.*

As for Edward:
His hair seems a little stiff, and his metal arm seems a little too short. on his right arm the wrist looks too thick compared to the size of his finger.

Al:
You did a really good job on him n_n.
Everything is great, except the arm - it looks more humanish than metalish. (mostly the hand)
I also think that the rest should have a little sharper edges, to make it seem more.. yea, sharp and metalish xD

OK for Al.
I gotta resize the finger but I thought the meca arm was too long: it's only the half of the arm that we can see.

Nah, it looks good as it is.

Lol TY! ^^
Whatever, I'll fix the finger. =P

-feels like CnCing before commenting-

Well, i think Ed's hand seems alittle small o: if u think about a rl person, put ur hand beside ur head, ur hand is almost the same size as ur face o: and i think the wrist looks too small in my opinion oDo (contradicting to panda's comment LOL D:)

As for Al, the arm seems too small compared to his body o: maybe enlarge it to fit? (i know its hard to erase and redraw but u dont have to if u dont wanna 8D) and im not sure if its just me, but i think the eye looks alittle too big or too high o:

BUT SERIOUSLY, AWESOME F-IN JOB!!! 8DDDD BROTHERHOOD ALL THE MOTHER FUDGING WAY!!!! omfg did u see the latest episodes? D: SO DAM INTENSE!!

Oki Im gonna fix Ed's wrist and maybe resize Al's arm.
Thx for CnC anyway!

In France, the episode 29 is just out... =( The new opening's awesome!!! 8D

UPDAAATE!! 8D
Inked version (Im gonna make the lines clean and rectify some small details like that later.)

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Im not used to ink yet, trying to practice as much as possible... =/

Gonna clean + color it later! 8D

ohmyfg.
klshskdfhaskd
I LUB EDWARDDDD <3
fma for the fucking win!

OHYES!
FMA brings back good memories
I'm still a big huge fan of your detailedness (is that even a word?) xD
And of course your shading as well!

*can't find detailedness in teh dictionnary... =/*
FMA always brings me good memories! ^^
I'm trying to color it but my inspiration is around...
0%!... D8