Day and Night Semi Haiku

I'm not good with poetry so no one laugh

*prepares weapon for the ones that do*


Day & Night

The spirit rises over the rocky seas.
Lifting it's head to devour the sun.
The sun poison the spirit with it's dying breath
and, become the great eagle.
The spirit dies and join the great sea.
The water splashes and become the luminous stars.
The eagle mounts the highest peak of stone,
praying to the stars.
The stars cry and ,
becomes the great mother moon.

That's gorgeous! c:
There are a lot of grammar problems but oh well, the meaning is lovely.